Talk:So Round, So Firm, So Fully Packed

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This article states: "The song describes a woman through the use of advertising slogans. The slogan "So round, so firm, so fully packed, so free and easy on the draw" was used in the Lucky Strike brand cigarette advertising of the time, first heard in 1944 on the Jack Benny and Your Hit Parade radio programs.[citation needed] "I'd walk a mile" is a slogan for Camel cigarettes. "Just ask the man who owns one" refers to Packard automobiles. "She's got the pause that's so refreshing" is a reference to the Coca-Cola slogan "The Pause that Refreshes"." This is pretty odd, just a string of random slogans. Perhaps if it started with: "The song describes a woman through the use of advertising slogans, such as:" and then list the examples in bullet form, it might be more clear what the heck is trying to be said. 2601:801:380:63E0:B449:9D0:7904:D2EE (talk) 18:22, 9 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]