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Good articleSincerity Is Scary has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
February 10, 2019Good article nomineeNot listed
March 5, 2021Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 31, 2019.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the lead singer of the English rock band The 1975 wrote the song "Sincerity Is Scary" in order to "denounce all of that postmodern fear of ... being real"?
Current status: Good article


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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:12, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Second time reviewing one of your articles during the GAN backlog, as this is the oldest songs nominee that can be reviewed by me! --K. Peake 10:12, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Target neo jazz to Nu jazz  Done
  • "The song was released on" → "It was released on" swapping order with the writing/production sentence  Done, plus the release date needs to be directly mentioned in the body
  • "It was written by" → "The song was written by"  Done
  • Remove wikilink on trumpet  Done
  • "who provides the" → "who provide the"  Done
  • "Musically, "Sincerity Is Scary" is an experimental neo soul, R&B and neo jazz ballad built" → "An experimental neo soul, R&B and neo jazz ballad, "Sincerity Is Scary" is built" with the target  Done
  • Too much of what is incorporated in the production is listed in the lead; specifically recommend removing gospel choirs per repetition  Done
  • Remove wikilink on saxophone  Done
  • Wikilink arrangements  Done
  • Target lounge to Lounge music  Done
  • "for being cold and" → "for being generally cold and"  Done
  • "and causing a breakdown" → "and leading to a breakdown"  Done
  • Remove the remarking part, as that is not notable for the lead  Done
  • "was met with generally positive reviews" → "received generally positive reviews"  Done
  • "who praised the production," → "who mostly praised the production,"  Done
  • Remove D'Angelo from the compared part, as the sections mentioning the artist are outside of reception  Done
  • "It performed modestly on international music charts, peaking at" → "It peaked at" for more appropriate lead language  Done
  • UK chart position should come first, as that is their native country  Done
  • "Silver in the United Kingdom, denoting sales of over 200,000 units." → "silver in the United Kingdom by the British Phonographic Industry (BPI)." with the wikilink  Done
  • "A music video directed by Warren Fu" → "An accompanying music video, directed by Warren Fu," with the wikilink  Done
  • "and it later appeared" → "while it later appeared"  Done

Background and development

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  • Quote box looks good!
  • "November of the same year and included" → "November of the same year and includes"  Done
  • Remove music annotation website introduction to Genius  Done
  • Remove wikilink on Beats 1 Radio  Done
  • "recognizing his defence mechanisms" → "recognizing certain defence mechanisms of his"  Done
  • Img looks good!
  • "with the group providing" → "with them providing" because they are a choir, but to write so here would be too repetitive  Done
  • "Healy lauded them as" → "Healy lauded the choir as"  Done
  • "Abbey Road's Studio Three and was engineered by Chris Bolster and assisted" → "Abbey Road's Studio Three, which were engineered by Chris Bolster with assistance" with the target  Done
  • Remove wikilink on trumpet  Done
  • "the band first heard Hargrove play" → "they were highly impressed by Hargrove's playing on" per the source not saying this was the first time they heard him  Done
  • "on one of the band's" → "on one of the 1975's" but the first non-band info is not mentioned by the source  Done
  • "in remembrance of Hargrove." → "in remembrance of Hargrove, who Healy assured "made those songs so special for us"." per the source  Done

Music and lyrics

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  • Remove wikilinks on saxophone and trumpet for the audio sample text  Done
  • The experimental neo soul info is not mentioned by [21]  Done
  • Remove target on F#♭5  Done
  • Wikilink arrangements  Done
  • The gospel choir is not mentioned by any of the sources in that sentence; if you are referring to the London Community Gospel Choir, then remove from this area since their involvement is mentioned later in the para  Done
  • Was just paraphrasing the "chorus of voices on the song's refrain" in the NPR source, but a more specific source that directly calls it "gospel choirs" has been added! Giacobbe talk 16:23, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove wikilink on saxophone  Done
  • [32][33][25][35] should be put in numerical order  Done
  • "as a songwriter, and" → "as a songwriter and"  Done
  • Target social media surveillance to Privacy concerns with social networking services  Done
  • "and communication breakdowns" → "and a communication breakdown" per the sourcing  Done
  • "He considered the line" → "He considered the lyrics"  Done
  • "noting the later lyric is" → "noting the later phrase is"  Done
  • "throughout their second studio album." → "throughout the album."  Done
  • Allmusic → AllMusic  Done
  • "that the use of layered vocals in the chorus is" → "that the vocals in the chorus are" per the source; no layers are mentioned  Done
  • Remove the release year of "If I Believe You" due to it being listed in the previous section  Done
  • "shared sonic similarities owing" → "share sonic similarities owing"  Done

Reception

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  • Retitle to Release and reception, adding a sentence about the single release as the first sentence with a source  Done
  • Img looks good!
  • Remove the part about criticism, as that is not notable when all you have here for what was specifically praised is Hargrove (via an image)  Done
  • "deemed "Sincerity Is Scary" a" → "deemed the song a" to avoid repeating the title too much  Done
  • Shouldn't the critical info be organised by thematic element, i.e the content that reviewers most praised coming first?
  • "contribution to "Sincerity Is Scary"." → "contribution to the song."  Done
  • The Ringer should not be italicised  Done
  • "highlighted the contrast between" → "highlighted the contrast of"  Done
  • "most exciting single released from" → "most exciting single from" to be less wordy  Done
  • "commenting that the song's subject matter" → "commenting that its subject matter"  Done
  • "were performed through" → "are performed through"  Done
  • "commended the band" → "commended the 1975"  Done
  • "exploring larger, more serious topics," → "exploring a larger, more serious topic," per the source  Done
  • Identify Althea Legaspi as being from Rolling Stone  Done
  • "called it a" → "called the song a"  Done
  • "she felt the band was" → "Cudmore felt the band was"  Done
  • Wikilink UK Singles Chart  Done
  • Ireland should come before the US because that is in Europe and it was also on a main singles chart  Done
  • "certified Silver in the United Kingdom," → "certified silver in the UK by the British Phonographic Industry (BPI)," with the wikilink  Done

Music video

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Development and release

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  • Img looks good!
  • "Building upon an old Hollywood musical theme," → "Building upon a Hollywood musical theme," per the source  Done
  • Are you sure the chorus girls target is correct  Done
  • [54] should be solely at the end of the para because it backs up all of the sentences after [53] as well as the first sentence of the para  Done
  • The first sentence of Fu's quote is not needed since the several months part is that reworded; keep the rest of the quote though  Done
  • The flow is not sourced as being panoramic  Done
  • "called it his proudest" → "called the video his proudest"  Done
  • "soup levels wholesome."" → "soup levels wholesome"." per MOS:QUOTE  Done
  • "On 26 October," → "On 26 October 2018,"  Done
  • "a caption reading" → "a caption reading:"  Done
  • "In the picture, the singer wears a" → "On both the occasions, the singer wore a"  Done
  • "challenged the band's fanbase" → "challenged the 1975's fanbase"  Done

Synopsis

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  • It is not sourced that there is a framed photo on the wall due to the gif not showing up  Done
  • "titled I Like America and America Likes Me," → "entitled I Like America and America Likes Me,"  Done
  • Target should only be on "of the same name" text  Done
  • "out the 1975's name." → "out the 1975's name; this is why an extra hand was added." per the source  Done
  • "his demeanour changes to" → "Healy's demeanour changes to"  Done
  • "No Rome cameos in" → "No Rome makes a cameo in"  Done
  • The dog being a Dalmatian is not sourced  Done
  • "he encounters a man" → "Healy encounters a man" to be specific  Done
  • "modernity has failed us" → "Modernity has failed us" per the source's stylisation  Done
  • "Healy encounters a passerby with a bouquet of flowers, and" → "The singer steals flowers and"  Done
  • Img looks good!
  • "immediately emerge from a" → "immediately emerging from a"  Done
  • "He engages a dance-off" → "He engages in a dance-off"  Done
  • ""A Change of Heart" (2016) and" → ""A Change of Heart" (2016), and"  Done
  • [57][58][55] put in numerical order  Done
  • [53][57][55] put in numerical order  Done
  • It is not sourced that the piano cartoonishly crashes onto the sidewalk, but mention the chorus starting at this point per Billboard  Done
  • It is not mentioned by* the source that the camera pans when he is in front of the theatre  Done
  • "The singer performs the" → "Healy performs the"  Done
  • "on her using a watering can, and her appearance is" → "on her, with the girl's appearance being" per the source  Done

Reception and controversy

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  • "by contemporary music critics." → "by contemporary critics."  Done
  • "He compared it to" → "He compared the visual to"  Done
  • "Graves deemed it a" → "Graves deemed the music video a"  Done
  • "echoed Graves' comments," → "echoed Graves' second comment,"  Done
  • "called it "incredibly" → "called the visual "incredibly"  Done
  • "best music videos of the year," → "best music videos of 2018,"  Done
  • "included it on her" → "included the video on her"  Done
  • "commending its visual beauty," → "commending the visual beauty,"  Done
  • "dance routines, calling it" → "dance routines, while calling it"  Done
  • "praising the 1975's" → "with C.S. praising the 1975's"  Done
  • "ranked it at" → "ranked the visual at"  Done
  • "said it is "is so" → "said it "is so"  Done
  • "in front of near-identical backdrops." → "in front of similar backdrops."  Done
  • [78] should be solely at the end of the para because it backs everything past [77] up  Done
  • "a "massive fan" of the 1975 who made" → "a "massive fan" who heavily respects the 1975 and made" per the source  Done

Live performances

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  • Wikilink Jack Whitehall  Done
  • "Healy utilized the same" → "Healy also utilized the same"  Done
  • "The band performed" → "The 1975 performed"  Done
  • "the Coachella music festival on 12 April 2019." → "the Coachella Festival on 12 April." with the target  Done
  • "their Music For Cars Tour, and" → "their the Music for Cars Tour and"  Done
  • "as part of their Music For Cars Tour setlist," → "as part of the tour's setlist,"  Done
  • The "backdrop of the houses" part being replicated is not mentioned by the source, but "dancing through the streets" is so reword accordingly I guess
  • It is sourced in the embedded video that auto-plays the moment you open the page, in addition to being sourced again in a separate video further down in the article. But I'll add it the other part too. Giacobbe talk 22:03, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel

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Charts

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  • Good

Certifications

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References

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  • Copyvio score looks too high at 44.1%; cut down quoting from Atwood Magazine to resolve this  Done
  • Great job archiving as many as the tool can do!
  • Remove ref 14 per WP:RSP on Genius for lyrics  Done
  • These are annotated from the band themselves, as part of the "Verified" series, which explicitly shows the difference in annotations made by the artist and those made by users. Giacobbe talk 22:14, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • WP:OVERLINK of iHeartRadio on ref 22  Done
  • Cite Sputnikmusic as publisher instead for ref 26  Done
  • Target Complex to Complex (magazine) on ref 40 per MOS:LINK2SECT  Done
  • Ref 43's archive is not working; replace with an older one, as these tend to work properly for musicOMH  Done
  • Cite Promonews as work/website instead for ref 54  Done
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  • Good

Final comments and verdict

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