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This review is transcluded from Talk:Shumen Plateau Nature Park/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

General
  • No copyvio/dablink/external link issues
    • Thanks
Lead
  • on the highest plateau "on" is redundant if you refer to Shumen Plateau
    • Corrected
  • Fagus sylvatica subspecies moesiaca Any common name?
    • Added
  • its ancient indigenous forest of the Fagus sylvatica subspecies moesiaca The proper way to write this is "... indigenous Fagus sylvatica moesiaca forest" (also in Geography)
    • Added in the lead and Geography section
  • The paras may be combined
    • Done
  • which is integral to the Operational Program Not sure what "which" refers to here, Republic of Bulgaria or the project or the trail (Also in Trails)
    • Clarified
Geography
  • What are the Shumen Heights?
    • The article in this reference [1] is titled "An investigation into the flora of the Shumen Heights." It probably means Shuman range of hills. I have put it under quotes.
  • oriented a the northwest-southeast direction Error or is something missing?
    • Corrected
  • is use of the trails is "the"
    • Corrected
History
  • The park's management rests You mean the "responsibility of the park's management"?
    • Corrected
Biology
  • and its water resources, climate and soil What is "it"? Park or plateau?
    • It is the plateau. Corrected in the text
  • in alphabetical order Redundant, it is understood
    • Changed
  • The mammals species "species" is redundant. Same for "reptile species"
    • Corrected
  • The animal species, which are under different protection categories Weird way to say this, as we have been classifying animals until now.
    • Changed
Cultural heritage
  • There are many cultural landmarks within the limits of the park or just adjacent to the park. These are: Not really needed
    • Changed
  • (Shumenska krepost) Add "Bulgarian"
    • Added

@Nvvchar: Seems Legobot has not notified you about this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:20, 26 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Thanks for this quick review. I do not get any intimation of starting of review or approval of GA. I did not get the ping message also. I have asked for help but the problem is not getting resolved. I saw your review comments just about an hour back and immediately addressed all issues in the article. I hope the corrections are fine. Nvvchar. 15:19, 26 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, I will promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:22, 26 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]