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Budget is ambiguous

In this edit I adjusted the budget from 105 crore to 85–105 crore. The source, this, contains ambiguous language. "Shivaay, meanwhile, has been made at an approximate budget of Rs 105 crore with Rs 20 crore spent on promotions." Because of how this is phrased, it's unclear if they mean that the production budget was 105 crore, or if 105 crore contains the 20 crore promotional expense. Until this is clarified, I think it should be presented as a range. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 22:12, 13 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Replace "They eventaully fall in love." with "They eventually fall in love." Way2rach (talk) 05:52, 17 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Done Best, Jean Stair (talk) 06:05, 17 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Replace "Shivaay implores her to remain in India with him but Olga, despite her love for Shivaay, does not want the child. " with "He implores her to remain in India with him, but despite her love for Shivaay, Olga does not want the child." Way2rach (talk) 05:57, 17 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Thank you for your inputs. Best, Jean Stair (talk) 06:06, 17 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Replace "What we have below is a mix of nett and gross" with "What we have below is a mix of net and gross" Way2rach (talk) 06:05, 17 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Not done The article uses Indian English; as per which "nett" is more apt than its variant. Jean Stair (talk) 06:07, 17 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]