Talk:She's All I Ever Had/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

This is the last remaining songs GAN from October, therefore I shall wipe it out! --K. Peake 10:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
Why are the producers ordered differently in the infobox from elsewhere?
In the prose, add after the main producers, "with co-production from Rosa."
Wikilink love song
"while he continues to live" → "while continuing to live"
"who complimented its production" → "who complimented the production"
"reached the summit of" → "reached the summit of both"
"The track was" → "The version was"
Wikilink music video and add some info to the lead about the synopsis

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 14:59, 14 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Background and release

Remove the comma before Vuelve
It does not appear that any of the sources here actually back up critics in general praising the album

@Kyle Peake: Los Angeles Times article is a review of the album, praising it and giving it 3.5 stars out of 4, but if I need to add more reviews to back it up, I will add. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 10:48, 14 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

This is one review so is not a suitable source for consensus and I don't think adding multiple ones is suitable for backing up critics praising it; use a source that states the reviews were positive or remove this part. --K. Peake 11:09, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"It topped the charts" → "The song topped the charts"
"has been working" → "had started working"
"that his album," → "that the album,"
"has been set for" → "had been set for"
Pipe best-selling singles of all time to List of best-selling singles
Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
"mentioning that the album was" → "mentioning that it was"
"that one of the album's tracks" → "that one of the tracks" because we already know this is about the album
"Martin dedicated the track" specify if this is the former or latter
"on August 30, 1999, September 15, 1999, and" → "on August 30, September 15, and" since 1999 being after the last date makes it clear all of them are from the year
"The maxi singles contain different" → "The singles contain different"

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 14:59, 14 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Music and lyrics

Audio sample looks good!
Like I said about the lead, mention the co-production after the lead producers
"According to the both versions'" → "According to both versions'"
Remove pipe on beats per minute
Wikilink love song
Are you sure the punctuation shouldn't be inside quotes for the lyrics?

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 14:59, 14 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

"and heartfelt" and "boasting" → "and heartfelt", and "boasting"
"of Robi Rosa’s" → "of Robi Rosa's" (wrong apostrophe format)
"in the feels".[37]" → "in the feels",[37] while" merging with the following sentence

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:26, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Accolades

""Bella" was also nominated for" → "It was also nominated for"
2000 Latin Billboard Music Awards → 2000 Latin Billboard Music Awards
"in Pop/Ballad category" → "in the Pop/Ballad category"
Pipe BMI Latin Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:26, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Commercial performance

"it became Martin's second top five" → "the song became Martin's second top-five"
"and Adult Contemporary, respectively." → "and Adult Contemporary charts, respectively."
"On the latter, it spent 38 weeks on the chart, becoming Martin's first top 10" → "It spent 38 weeks on the latter chart, becoming Martin's first top-10"
Mention the date it was certified by the RIAA and that this is for those copies in the US
Remove Spanish-language intro to "Bella" since this is already known
"It also peaked" → "The track also peaked"
Per Geographical order, Canada should be the first of the para and use the title at the start of this sentence instead
"top five hit in the country," → "top-five hit in Canada,"
After the Australia sentence, add one about how the song reached the top 10 in New Zealand, peaking at number eight
Croatia should be after the Oceania territories per Geographical order, then follow it with the other top 10 and 20 ones that are in Europe
[72] is not displaying any position

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:46, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Music videos

Img looks good!
Remove "for "She's All I Ever Had"" after the accompanying music video part, as the term accompanying makes it clear this is for the song

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:50, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Live performances and appearances in media

The term "impressive" is not encyclopedic to describe women, so remove the word
"the sixth performance" → "the sixth best performance"
"Daneesha Davis of" → "Daneesha Davis of the"
"of the former as" → "of the song as" because it was sentences ago that both were mentioned
"in 2006 where Martin" → "in 2006, where Martin"
"as snake on" → "as the snake on"

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:51, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pipe season two to The Masked Singer (American season 2)

It is not the American series, the song was covered on the second season of the Bulgarian series, which I already piped. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:51, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Formats and track listings

Good

Credits and personnel

Good

Charts

Weekly charts

Pipe HRT TO Hrvatska radiotelevizija
Again, the Iceland position is not displayed by the source

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:53, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Year-end charts

Good

Certifications and sales

Retitle to Certifications per no specific sales figures being mentioned by a source

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:53, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Release history

Good

References

Copyvio score looks nice at 30.6%!!!
Add the language parameter to ref 5
WP:OVERLINK of Apple Music on ref 21
Add the language parameter to ref 22
Wikilink The Indianapolis Star on ref 25
Pipe The Gazette to Montreal Gazette on ref 34
WP:OVERLINK of Tidal (service) on ref 36
Remove wikilink on The Indianapolis Star for ref 38
Pipe BMI Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards on ref 50
Pipe Nielsen Business Media, Inc to Nielsen Holdings on ref 61
Pipe Croatian Radiotelevision to Hrvatska radiotelevizija on ref 66
Ref 72 needs to be working for the Iceland position, so either add an archive or different source and italicise Dagblaðið Vísir then pipe to DV (newspaper)
Cite Univision as publisher on ref 85
MOS:QWQ issues with ref 89 and wikilink MTV News
Add Tidal as publisher for ref 93
WP:OVERLINK of El Diario La Prensa on ref 97
Wikilink Music & Media on ref 114
Cite last name then first on ref 116
Add an archive, replace or remove ref 129 since the URL automatically closes when I open it in a tab

Done--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 16:07, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 11:09, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake: Thank you for another wonderful review. As always it was an honor for me. I fixed all the issues, I hope I haven't missed anything. If I had, please tell me to fix it. Thank you so much. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 16:10, 15 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

✓ Pass time, you have done a solid job once again! --K. Peake 07:37, 16 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]