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Plans for improvement

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- improve impartiality and writing style to be less essay-style

- use more examples of survivors' experiences

- new sections TBD CyanCaribou (talk) 23:20, 30 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: History of Sexuality

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 10 January 2023 and 19 April 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sarahjones115, CyanCaribou (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Rgxo (talk) 16:50, 20 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Tone

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Hi, I'm quite new to editing, but I think that this article has severe issues with tone. I was a little harsh in my description of it in my edits and for that I apologize. However, reading the last entry on this page, one of the main plans for improvement was "improve impartiality and writing style" and I saw that there was a tone tag on this article at one point that got removed a while back, but the article still definitely has tone issues. Does anyone have a plan to work on this? Should I put the tone tag back on and continue working on it? Thanks. Wogular54 (talk) 23:56, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]