Talk:Sadie Sink/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:46, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Pamzeis (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Take a fresh look at some of the paragraphs, which could benefit from variance in sentence length and sometimes sentence starts. Only a few grammar errors. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:56, 27 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Pamzeis Just making sure: you think you've tackled everything? Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 20:59, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for not responding earlier, but I believe I've resolved all your comments. Lemme know if there's anything else! Pamzeis (talk) 05:01, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

She began acting at age seven in local theater productions, and played the title role in Annie (2012–14) One subject, no comma WP:CINS
They would often recreate scenes from High School Musical (2006); and watch Broadway plays and Tony Award performances. Incorrect use of a semicolon
Try and vary the starts of sentences: sometimes three sentences in a row start "She" or "Sink"
Reflow some paragraphs that feel a little jammed with unrelated content
while the Los Angeles Times's Justin Chang found her emotional intensity "impressive", but felt her role was poorly written Drop the comma

Sourcing and spot checks

6: Glamour story lists siblings and contains the "step out of being a kid on screen" quote. Y
37: IGN comment is correctly reproduced. Y
45: W story on Sink's return to S3 of Stranger Things. Y
48 + 49: Sink joining the second half; the first ref mentions the trilogy more. Y
54: It only fuels Ziggy’s anger at the world and herself, and Sink’s intense performance gets a great deal of volume out of this one note. Y
57: Looks like this sentence really could stand with only 58, but no issues with the ref if needed elsewhere for this topic. Y
65: Across nine episodes, which were released in two parts on May 27 and July 1... Y
68: stars like Millie Bobby Brown and Sadie Sink (the clear standout of the fourth season) remained snubbed one of several acclaim examples Y
71 as a citebundle of 67–70, instead reviewing
- 70: While Stranger Things is led by an ensemble of fantastic young talent, Sink comes out as such a clear breakout that the strangest thing of all would be her not getting some serious recognition come award season. Y
74: Saturn Award nomination. Y
101: I made the switch almost five years ago after I worked with Woody Harrelson on a movie. He’s a very passionate vegan and his entire family is vegan as well, so by spending time with them, I was able to learn that a vegan lifestyle is totally doable and it’s not as hard as it may seem. Y
122: Woods Hole win for Dear Zoe. Y

Earwig flags a few quotes, but nothing of concern.

Images

There are three images, all CC-licensed from various festivals. Encouragement: Alt text of "Refer to caption" probably suffices.

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