Talk:Quannnic/GA1
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Nominator: Skyshifter (talk · contribs) 18:13, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: LunaEclipse (talk · contribs) 21:35, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
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Hi! I'll review this in the following days. 💽 LunaEclipse 💽 🌹 ⚧ (CALL ME IF YOU GET LOST) 21:35, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
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[edit]Prose
[edit]- Eli Enis/Stereogum quote (source #2) could be paraphrased.
- "In early 2023, a track from the album, "Life Imitates Life", suddenly became popular on TikTok."
- "suddenly became popular on TikTok" ==> "went viral on TikTok."
- "However, by 2021, they felt creatively constrained by that sound and began shifting towards more rock-oriented styles.[2] That year, they started releasing music under the name quannnic." ==> "However, by 2021, they felt creatively constrained by that sound and began shifting towards more rock-oriented styles; that year, they started releasing music as quannnic."
- "By November, the song had been used in 16,000 clips on the platform, and it charted at number 23 on Billboard's Hot Hard Rock Songs with 525,000 official streams earned in the U.S. On Spotify, it had 30 million streams by December." ==> "By November, the song had been used in 16,000 clips on the platform, and it charted at number 23 on Billboard's Hot Hard Rock Songs with 525,000 official streams earned in the United States; on Spotify, it had 30 million streams by December."
- Capitalize the "Q" in Quannnic per MOS:SMALLCAPS.
- In November 2023, Quannnic released their second studio album, Stepdream. Quannnic co-headlined Jane Remover's 2024 U.S. tour, which began in February of that year. ==> Quannnic released Stepdream, their second studio album, in November 2023. They co-headlined Jane Remover's 2024 U.S. tour, which began in February of that year.
This is all I have for now. 💽 LunaEclipse 💽 🌹 ⚧ (CALL ME IF YOU GET LOST) 14:44, 27 November 2024 (UTC)
Spotcheck
[edit]Everything's fine. Ones to Watch would be concerning, but Quannnic is not a Live Nation member AFAIK, so this gets a pass.
Neutrality/NPOV
[edit]Pass.
@Skyshifter: this is a kind reminder to address the comments above. 💽 LunaEclipse 💽 🌹 ⚧ (CALL ME IF YOU GET LOST) 18:29, 1 December 2024 (UTC)