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Presidency of Ram Nath Kovind was nominated as a Social sciences and society good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (March 24, 2021). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Presidency of Ram Nath Kovind/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: ArnabSaha (talk · contribs) 20:23, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
Is it verifiable with no original research?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:

C. It contains no original research:

D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
Is it neutral?
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Comments

Multiple parts unsourced. Like "Croatia, Bolivia and Chile" section, "Greece" section etc.
The citations aren't properly formatted. Citations [45], [46], [47] etc. are simply links.
It has other MoS issues. Things in lead must be incorporated into the body also etc. ("He is the first leader from Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh to occupy the office of President of India." - I couldn;t find this in the body)
There are grammatical issues too. It misses multiple articles and determiners etc.
Excess number of images. Looks like photo gallery.
It just lists the speeches and visits by president. No other proper details like actions taken, orders etc.
It also has paraphrasing issue. (As per this)
Comprehensiveness issue. It needs a lot of work.
As of now, it is more like a government profile.

When these issues are addressed, the article can be renominated. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to have it reassessed. Also I would suggest to have this article copyedited at WP:GOCE. Thank you for your work so far. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 14:38, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]