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Nominator: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 17:48, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:07, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Of course we've been in reviews together for the past so you know what to expect; this one should be done quickly! --K. Peake 08:07, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Change Soundabout Studio to Soundabout per Template:Infobox song
  • The translation title can be written out in the body, rather than invoking the ref in the lead
  • "Its production was handled by" → "The song was produced by" and also add written by Juan Gabriel since the lead is short enough that you could do with this inclusion
  • "The song is a" → "It is a" to sound less repetitive
  • "It was released" → "The song was released"
  • "with critics listing" → "with a few critics listing"
  • The term "several" being used is redundant
  • Add a comma before whose in the last sentence

Background and composition

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  • Add the release year of "Heal the World" on the audio sample
  • "a hiatus following legal disputes" → "a hiatus after legal disputes"
  • "The dispute involved Gabriel" → "The dispute involved Juan Gabriel" to be consistent
  • "but would not be released" → "but it would not be released"
  • "and Gabriel renewed his" → "and Juan Gabriel renewed his"
  • "both the name of the album" → "both the album's title of" removing the brackets since they would not be needed in this case
  • "in which lyrics describes" → "in which the lyrics describe"
  • "He re-recorded the track" → "Juan Gabriel re-recorded the track"

Promotion and reception

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  • Per the Los Angeles Times ref currently used in the lead, add a second sentence with the translated title and mention the Spanish radio from that ref
  • "brotherhood". It features children" → "brotherhood", featuring children" to improve the flow
  • "Ramiro Burr wrote for the" → "Ramiro Burr, writing for the"
  • "compared it to ABBA" → "compared the song to ABBA"
  • "despite its "serious theme", he found it" → "despite the "serious theme", he found the song"
  • "Classic Rock reviewer ranked it" → "a Classic Rock reviewer ranked the song" and the source shows number seven for me, not number three
  • "Gabriel earned the" → "Juan Gabriel earned the"
  • "Commercially, it topped" → "Commercially, the track topped"

Charts

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  • Why is this table not present when the song did reach charts?

See also

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  • Good

References

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Final thoughts and verdict

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