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"Sergio Chávez and his younger Miguel," - replace the text in bold to younger brother
"better known under the ring name Ángel de Oro" - a comma is needed after this piece of text
"The feud led both Chávez to work for International Wrestling Revolution Group (IWRG) on opposite sides, but Sergio broke his arm in early 2008 and did not compete for eight months." - are we also refering to his brother? If so, he needs to be mentioned in this sentence.
"In Durango he feuded with his younger brother, in a feud that was so well received by the crowd that both his brother and he received an invitation" - replace the text in bold to the sibilings
"to complement his brothers" - brother's
"The duo made their CMLL debut on July 4, 2008 wrestling as a team dubbed Los Angeles Celestiales ("The Celestial Angels")" - a full stop needs to be inserted to end this sentence
"In late 2009 Los Ángeles Celestiales participated in a tournament to crown new Mexican National Trios Champion." - to crown a new
"The team lost in the first round to Los Cancerberos del Infierno (Virus, Pólvora and Euforia" - the closing bracket is missing at the end of this section of text
"On the January 15, 2010 Super Viernes Ángel de Plata" - change the text in bold to January 15, 2010 per MOS:DATEFORMAT
"Niebla Roja competed in CMLL's first ever" - inaugural is more formal in this instance
"but did not qualify for the semi-final part of the tournament." - remove part of the touranment since it is already established it was a tournament beforehand
"Niebla Roja was forced to team up with Dragón Rojo, Jr. from the rival Los Revolucionarios del Terror "rival" group" - reptition of rival
Thank you for the great feedback, it is helping make this a much stronger article and I appreciate your detailed feedback. I have addressed the references issues and will work on the rest now. MPJ-DK (talk) 23:20, 30 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]