Talk:Niš Declaration

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Niš Declaration/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:54, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"December 1914, during the Battle of Kolubara as a " comma after Kolubara.
Is List of former capitals of Serbia a useful link for "temporary capital"?
- See below (T)
"Since the outbreak" Following makes more sense to my ear than Since.
"Yugoslav state" can we link, or at least Yugoslavia or a variant of Yugo?
- Linked to "establishment of a Yugoslav state" to Creation of Yugoslavia (T)
"the United States entered the war" you don't need to link United States on its own, just pipe the whole thing to their entry into the war article.
Ref 14 should be pp.
"1918-1992." en-dash in year range of the title.

That's it for me. This is a really neat piece of work. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:39, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking time to review this nomination. I have addressed your comments above as suggested - except the link to the List of former capitals of Serbia. Wouldn't such a link be against WP:EGG though? If you think that's not a problem, I'll be happy to add the link. Otherwise, I don't see any direct loss to understanding of the topic from omission of the link.--Tomobe03 (talk) 21:08, 6 September 2021 (UTC) The Rambling Man, do you think the above link should be added anyway (to the list of capitals)?--Tomobe03 (talk) 13:13, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think the absence of the link is a "loss" but I think it might be useful for people to know about other capitals of Serbia... The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 13:15, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Added now to the lede and the prose body.--Tomobe03 (talk) 13:20, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]