Talk:New England Revolution in international competition/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Brindille1 (talk · contribs) 04:14, 26 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 01:27, 1 January 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Article looks good. Just some copy changes. Also, take a fresh look as this page has sat for a very long time at GA and make sure you don't spot anything. Ping me when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 01:52, 1 January 2025 (UTC)

Thanks for picking this up, @Sammi Brie! I've addressed the comments you left- I've also made a couple of small wording changes after re-reading the article. Brindille1 (talk) 18:01, 1 January 2025 (UTC)

Copy changes

History

• The match ended 3–1 result missing "in"
• Hyphenate "first-round" in "first-round result"
• This marked the first time an MLS team had lost to a team from the Caribbean, and the first time a side from Trinidad had put up more than three goals against an MLS side. Remove unnecessary comma
• They conceded three goals without scoring a goal of their own, and were eliminated when they lost 4–3 in a penalty shootout. Remove comma (WP:CINS)
• Remove quotations from "Champions Cup" (MOS:SCAREQUOTES)
• Hyphenate "regular-season"
• This time, the Revolution won 4–0 at home on March 6, and drew 1–1 on the road on March 14. Remove comma CINS
• The Revolution lost the first leg 4–0 at home, and fielded a rotated side away at the Estadio Azteca Remove comma CINS

Records

I added some captions here per MOS:DTAB. I considered screen reader–only captions for the last two except for the citation.

Other competitions

• The team won their group, but was eliminated in the Round of 32 Another CINS remove comma

Sourcing and spot checks

Reviewed: 11, 17, 18, 34, 37

No issues found.

Images

The images are all appropriately licensed and tagged.

Encouragement (not necessary for GA status): Add alt text to photos.

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