Talk:National Alliance for Immigrants' Rights

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sarias952. Peer reviewers: Abigailbarnes, Mlopez96.

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I had never heard of the National Alliance for Immigrants' Rights before, so this was very exciting and informative to read. I particularly like how the National Alliance for Immigrants' Rights is addressed as both an organization and a series of local actions, as I feel this adds depth to the article. As I was reading I noticed the following:

I think it would be helpful to give a brief explanation of how immigrants gained the capacity to regulate their immigration status.
There are some areas where the grammar could be tightened up to make the writing more clear.
The sources are formatted a little strangely, but I'm not sure how you would address this.

Overall I liked the composition of the article - the overlying chronological layout with emphasis on organizations and important actor Nativo Lopez-Vigil. I think with a little elaboration and refinement this will informative and lovely to read! Good Luck! Abigailbarnes (talk) 17:52, 4 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]