Talk:Mink Nutcharut/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 22:46, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 07:18, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

hi! brachy08, professional minecraft youtuber and GA reviewer here. can’t think of a good intro so... here you go~!

Copyvios

Violation unlikely (26.5%)

Early life

FN 1: Is "ashgabat2017.com" reliable?
FN 2: Source doesn't have author name for some reason??? That might not be a good sign for a source, so you should find another source that could be better. Also not archived.
has explained. Where though? WP:AMBIGUOUS
FN 4: Missing author on source, and the translation is a bit... werid
My dad loves snooker very much too and eventually I started playing and fell in love with this game at the age of 10-years-old. (taken from FN3) is not shown in the article.
FN 4 says that Mahitthi was one of the most prominent snooker players in the country. No support for amateur player.

Women's snooker

FN 7: Does not support defeating Siripaporn 5–2 in the final I'd suggest re-writing it to She later won it in 2016. Aged 16 could be redundant.
FN 8 is redundant in and retained the title at the next two annual tournaments
Can you explain contested by players who did not reach the quarter-finals of the main event?

Stuff that can help for FA

These stuff aren't mandatory for the GA review, but would help in the long run. Take this with a grain of salt though, I don't have much experience with FAs

She won the 2022 World Women's Snooker Championship, defeating Wendy Jans 6–5 on the final black to become the tournament's first Thai winner. She lost the 2024 final in the deciding frame against Bai Yulu. can be written in a different way to make it a bit more interesting and hook-ish.
It can do serious copy-editing to make the article a good read.