Talk:May Declaration

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Review: September 13, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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"Of course, this declaration was rejected. That only added more displeasure to Slovenian people."

Definitely not WP:NPOV. Chris the Paleontologist (talk • contribs) 22:43, 1 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

yup, tis gone. Ϣere SpielChequers 23:26, 1 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:May Declaration/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 14:48, 12 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"Austria–Hungary" en-dash or not? I see both variants here.
- Should be hyphen, changed (T)
The map (on my screen) is to the left of the bottom of the infobox so practically halves the width of the screen for text.
- Reformatted, hopefully appears better now (it does on my screen) (T)
Surprised that the author's name is not mentioned in the lead?
- Added now (T)
"the United States, whose " not sure we need to link this.
- You're right, that's overlinking (T)
"Anton Korošec, led the..." image caption is a complete sentence so needs a full stop.
- Added for this and the one noted below (T)
"the Roman Catholic Zagreb Archbishop Antun Bauer" sea of blue.
- Rephrased to move links apart (T)
"Ante Trumbić led the..." also needs a full stop.
Ref 3 should be pp.
- Changed as suggested (T)
Pavlowitch's year range needs an en-dash.
- Replaced with endash (T)

That's all I can find. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:38, 12 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man thank you for the review. I think I have addressed all the concerns set out above. I have reformatted the map to display as a standard image with a caption, so I expect it displays better now. Could you please have another look? Cheers--Tomobe03 (talk) 19:12, 12 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]