Talk:Mathias Nkwenti/GA1

GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:57, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 18:15, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 19:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Will review soon. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Maybe change stint in lead to "short offseason stint".
Added a cat.
Link training camp.
"Famed offensive line coach Joe Moore" Does the source actually say that. I can't see the clipping.

I didn't any other issues. Nice work. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:02, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: Linked training camp and changed the lead. As for Moore, the source mentions that "[Moore] earned a reputation as one of the best line coaches in NCAA history" – do you think the way I worded it is alright or should I change it? BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:18, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That looks good. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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