Talk:Mahmud Mirza Qajar
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[edit]Hello! In response to a request from @LouisAragon, I've completed my first pass on this article. This text seemed to use the Oxford comma, so I went with that.
Some things that may need to be resolved:
- Some topics might be expanded? For example, some prominent people Zia ol-Saltaneh and Mohammad Taqi Sepehr may provide further context on the main subject of this article.
- Not sure how best to treat Mohammad Taqi Sepehr's name in the article. Just "Sepehr" maybe?
- In the paragraph starting
Mahmud Mirza's chief wife...
, we have a list of 3 wives, but perhaps I'm misreading this list, and it's really 4 wives.
Feedback is very much welcome. Thanks! — LumonRedacts 14:21, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
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