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Wikify?

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I think the style and layout needs wikification —Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.243.253.113 (talk) 19:08, 24 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Biased and unprofessional

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This article needs a major overhaul. Maybe we could bring in the original author (he seems to know what he's talking about) and get him to write in a cleaner style and an unbiased tone...

Tethros (talk) 17:47, 24 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I totally agree and added a NPOV tag. If no one with knowledge of the subject takes up the task I will try to excise the worst of it from the article. 173.128.112.194 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 08:12, 15 October 2010 (UTC).[reply]
Highly disorganized article. Adds "modern" material in "ancient", it should be re-written. Bladesmulti (talk) 06:34, 30 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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There's currently a growing list of external links under the 'Famous Magicians from India' heading. I'd suggest this all be removed, in favor of a list of only indian magicians that already have an articles here on wikipedia. This is similiar to the way Stage illusions and List of magicians works.     Eclipsed   (talk)   (code of ethics)     23:02, 30 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

What's this article about?

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I can see an article which is a list of Indian magicians - which like our other lists of magicians, should only include those with articles. Or an article on Indian magic. But I'm not sure about this article. Dougweller (talk) 20:29, 10 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Basically.........

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it might help for me to dig around in some of my old copies of The Linking Ring....I know there're at least some great article about P.C. Sorcar (as a minimum). --Bddmagic (talk) 19:12, 24 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Which I'm still working on at the moment. --Bddmagic (talk) 01:53, 2 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
....still pending. However, I will probably move this away from Magic Collab. of the week so we can move on to something else. --Bddmagic (talk) 03:08, 21 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Redtigerxyz (talk · contribs) 18:21, 29 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Rate Attribute Review Comment
1. Well-written:
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
2c. it contains no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage:
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.

The following need to be covered

  • Ancient roots of Indian magic: They are mentioned in king Harshavardhana's court too (7th century)
  • Common tricks
  • Appearance/clothing
  • Street v/s Stage
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
7. Overall assessment. FAIL

magician sumit narayan

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Magician sumit narayan is a up coming magician in India. He is born in 1January 1998 in Gorakhpur u.p He is a card magician. Sumit narayan (talk) 17:30, 31 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]