Talk:Lou Rash/GA1

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:35, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 00:03, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:02, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:02, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Maybe make a note on was also a member of the Pittsburgh Steelers in the NFL and the Saskatchewan Roughriders and Toronto Argonauts in the Canadian Football League (CFL) that although he was on their teams, he never played a game for them?
Change about 18 pounds to almost 20 pounds to better summarize the source
at the position, and that he no need for the comma
You don't need to repeat Canadian Football League since you defined it in the lead
and was considered to have impressed early at cornerback, although he eventually was released on June 18 --> and although it was noted he impressed at cornerback, he was released on June 18.
Link to Free safety
Ref spot check:
- Link Delta Democrat Times (Ref 3)
- Red link Beaver Dam Daily Citizen (Ref 17) (it is red linked at The Daily Citizen)
- Add access-dates to Ref 2, 4, 12
- References are consistently formatted and match what is being cited.

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:33, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:26, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Nice work. Passed! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:34, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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