Talk:Lonny Calicchio/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:52, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 05:00, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Lead needs expanded a little.
• "American former professional"
• New high school infobox formatting.
• "Early life and college"
• Full name cited in body.
• "He lived in Burlington, Massachusetts" link
• "He signed with Maryland in following the 1992 season" remove in
• College years in infobox.
• "He attended South Plantation High School, Plantation, Florida," put "in Plantation, Florida" and link it also.
• spell out NJCAA, and put (NJCAA)
• I assume they lost the national title game?
• The college section ended a tad abruptly. What about senior stats or career totals?
• "Calicchio was signed by the Philadelphia Eagles to the practice squad." Link practice squad.
• "In 1998, he briefly spent time with the Buffalo Bills and was later signed by the Carolina Panthers, only to be released on August 25" More transaction details please. The transactions are on PFA (I know you already know that though).
• He was on the Bills practice squad in 1997 also.
• That's all. Really comprehensive work on this guy. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 05:00, 26 October 2024 (UTC)
  • @WikiOriginal-9: Think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:26, 27 October 2024 (UTC)
  • I did a spot check of the sources and didn't find any issues. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:50, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

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