Talk:Lego Jurassic World (theme)

Page issues

Hello, @Striker2020. Why have you reverted this edit? There are numerous issues with the current version.

• All information must be supported by reliable sources. The article contains dozens of press releases and fansites, but these should not be used as sources (see WP:SELFPUB). There are also instances of citation overkill.
• The "Sets" section contains excessive details like product codes and "promo sets" (what are those?), and I see no need to list every toy set ever released. It reads like a product listing. A general overview of basic facts, as mentioned in reliable sources, should suffice. The average reader isn't interested in vague product codes (I'm not sure what purpose those serve).
• The "Shorts" and "Video games" sections contain several smaller subsections that are unnecessary, given their size. As explained here, Very short sections and subsections clutter an article with headings and inhibit the flow of the prose. Short paragraphs and single sentences generally do not warrant their own subheading. This version would be ideal.
• The entries in the "See also" section are unnecessary, consisting of links that are already mentioned in the article or already included in the Jurassic Park navigation box at the bottom. For the "External links" section, only the main Lego link is needed. Jurassic Outpost is a fansite and has nothing to do with the article topic.

 AJFU  (talk) 16:15, 19 February 2021 (UTC)

I'm sorry @AJFU because I wasn't quite sure about that you rewrite my page. I thought of following the example from the other pages like Lego Ninjago, Lego Star Wars, Lego Toy Story, The Lego Movie (franchise) and Lego Indiana Jones must be in full details. All right I will revert it back right now. Striker2020 (talk) 03:32, 20 February 2021 (UTC)

@AJFU you're welcome to edit my page anytime you want and I have one question to ask do you really know about Lego? Striker2020 (talk) 05:46, 20 February 2021 (UTC)

It's not exactly your page. I see that you created it, but once created, everybody is welcome to edit it. See WP:OWNERSHIP. I wouldn't call myself a Lego expert, but I know enough about this particular line of products. Also, this edit should be removed unless you have a reliable source to support it.  AJFU  (talk) 16:11, 20 February 2021 (UTC)

Characters

Hello, @AJFU can I add the list of the characters in this page? Striker2020 (talk) 06:53, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

A list of characters for what exactly? The movies and animated projects (The Secret Exhibit and Legend of Isla Nublar) already have their own character lists. As for the toy sets, the "Overview" section already mentions that minifigures, based on the film characters, were released. That seems sufficient enough. The actual character names are not a major point that readers need to know in order to understand this page. If readers are curious to know who the film characters are, they would go to the film articles to learn more.

Also, a character list would require reliable sourcing. As far as I can tell, the minifigures are not commonly discussed in such sources. For example, this source vaguely mentions "two besuited characters" and a "guy with an umbrella". Chris Pratt's minifigure was the only one that really got any attention.  AJFU  (talk) 14:47, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

Construction sets

Hi @Fieryninja I found this second paragraph from the Overview section it's suppose to be known as the Construction Sets section. I try to make this second paragraph as the Construction Sets section. But the editor revert it back. Is there anyway I can do? Striker2020 (talk) 07:26, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

I think you should discuss this with the editor who reverted it. Fieryninja (talk) 08:17, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

@AJFU the last Friday you reverted it. I found the 2 sets are Indoraptor Rampage at Lockwood Estate and Jurassic Park: T. rex Rampage from the Overview section it can be related to the Contruction sets section. Striker2020 (talk) 14:22, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Fan videos are not construction sets, and neither is the life-sized model of Blue. These aren't toy sets that you can buy and assemble. They wouldn't belong in a section called "Construction sets".  AJFU  (talk) 15:25, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

@AJFU I got the answer the fan videos and the life-sized model of Blue will stay in the Overview section. While the Lego sets information will move to the Construction sets section. So what do you think? Striker2020 (talk) 05:31, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

That wouldn't be much of an overview then. I'm not sure that we even need to list fan videos here. They're not officially part of the Lego line.  AJFU  (talk) 14:23, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Development

@AJFU I found 10 source pages[1][2][3][4][5][6][7][8][9][10] for the development section will it be ok? Striker2020 (talk) 16:40, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

That appears to be another fansite, and from looking through those links, I'm not sure there's much that could be added. I doubt it would be enough to warrant a separate "Development" section.  AJFU  (talk) 22:01, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Fan videos and the life-sized model of Blue

@Fieryninja this 2 fan videos [11][12] and the life-sized model of Blue [13] from the Overview section was added by the editor. Do you think should remove it because they might not support the content and can you check the development and release section was it ok? Striker2020 (talk) 08:03, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

Hi Striker2020 I've had a look at the citations and I don't know the context as to why these have been included. The only reason I would include fan videos is if they were endorsed by The Lego Group. The life size model of Blue is something that is perhaps worth mentioning as part of the marketing of the product line. Sorry I can't be of more help. Perhaps you should discuss this further. If I get some time, I will have a look over the development and release content for you. Fieryninja (talk) 08:37, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

Striker2020 I've done a quick copy-edit on your text for the development and launch sections. I think the development section reads well. The launch is missing a citation for the launch date. I'm not too sure about the two quotes you have added - they read like press release statements. Maybe you can find more information about the launch, such as launch events or marketing activity to replace it. Fieryninja (talk) 10:07, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

@Fieryninja I found 5 sources [14][15][16][17][18] for the launch section and I will continue later. Striker2020 (talk) 14:18, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

Hi Striker2020 you can't use the first source because it's a blog. We can't use user generated content. If you can find a different source about the launch event that would be great. You want to mention the Toy Fair but I wouldn't focus too much on the set releases. Fieryninja (talk) 15:23, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

@Fieryninja sorry I pick the wrong sources. But I still continue searching for another sources. The marketing activity it might very hard for me find. The Toy Fair sources already added in the Overview section. Striker2020 (talk) 05:37, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

@Fieryninja I found the source from the marketing week [19], source from the mojo-nation [20] and source from metro[21]. I will continue later. Striker2020 (talk) 14:10, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Hi Striker2020 I will have a look too and see if I can find anything useful. Fieryninja (talk) 15:44, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

@Fieryninja I found another sources for overview section [22], [23] and [24] will it be ok? Striker2020 (talk) 16:51, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Striker2020 Good work on finding these sources. As I am new to this page, the only advice I can give is to make sure that you identify what points you are making with these sources. I'm not sure you need any more text in the overview section as it seems to summarise the main events. Fieryninja (talk) 17:09, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Fieryninja have found another sources for this page? Striker2020 (talk) 16:25, 18 April 2021 (UTC)

Striker2020 I have been looking but not found much so far. I will probably get more time tomorrow. I've been tied up with Ninjago (TV series) but I will see if I can find anything. Fieryninja (talk) 16:36, 18 April 2021 (UTC)

Blocks magazine

Hello Fieryninja I found the Blocks magazine issue 49 and 59 did mentioned about the Lego Jurassic World and can I know what is the page number so you can add in the Reception section? Striker2020 (talk) 07:41, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Hi Striker2020 I only have issue 75 so if you want to quote from the other issues, you will need a copy of them. Sorry I can't be of more help. Fieryninja (talk) 08:21, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Sources pages

Hello, Fieryninja I found this 2 sources [25][26] from toynews and I think this sources can be add in the Launch section. The other sources [27][28] but I'm not quite sure whether can be add in the Reception section or not? Striker2020 (talk) 06:18, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Hi Striker2020 I think you can use the first source for launch info (but best not to add the quote). The second source is good for the reception section. I don't think I would use the third source, but the fourth source is a good one for the reception section as well. Hope that helps. Fieryninja (talk) 08:44, 27 April 2021 (UTC)

Abandoned user draft

Please would an interested editor assess the earlier draft at User:Oon835/sandbox 5, merge anything worthwhile into the live article, blank the user page as WP:COPYARTICLE, and leave a note here when done? – Fayenatic London 13:27, 28 May 2024 (UTC)