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Nominator: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 22:09, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 04:33, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Hi! I will be reviewing this article, expect the initial remarks soon! Vestrian24Bio 04:33, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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@OlifanofmrTennant:

  • Update the article name at NFCC for File:Legends of Tomorrow season 3.jpg.
  • Remove the redundant |season_number= parameter from the infobox.
  • Per MOS:TVPLOT, plot summaries of no more than 200 words per episode should ideally be presented in a table...; ep 2 has 207 words.
  • Also, in ep 8 add This episode concludes a crossover event that begins on Supergirl season 3 episode 8, and continues on Arrow season 6 episode 8 and The Flash season 4 episode 8. as a note instead.

Vestrian24Bio 06:14, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Done the first three. Fourth the fourth I made it consistent with other Arrowverse season articles. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 06:59, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • 2 bugs were found by the Project Check Wikipedia script, fix them.
    • I cant figure out which refs have been duped. It appears to already have been fixed.
  • In ep 2, Sara tells the Legends about Mallus, an ancient archenemy of the Time Masters; he believes that the outlying anachronisms are Mallus' work. They disregard his warning.; is the 'he' and 'his' supposed to refer to Mallus, it sounds like referring Sara as a male.
    • It's meant to be Rip warning them
  • References (as of this rev)
    • Are refs 1, 3 and 11 needed? (tweets)
      • cut 3 and 11 kept 1 as is the start of filming, its an acceptable use of a primary source as Guggenheim was an executive producer
    • Is ref 51 reliable? couldn't it be replaced by a better RS.  Done
    • Refs 57 and 113 are unreliable.  Done
  • 4th note needs a ref for being promoted to the main cast starting with "The Curse of the Earth Totem". Done
  • Shouldn't young Ray, Nora and Martin be placed next to their grown-up casts with an increased indent just like Clarissa...  Not done
    • No because the young versions only appear in a guest capacity where the adults are regulars. Both versions of Clarrissa are guests
  • Italicize Legends of Tomorrow in the cast section's hatnote - {{Main|List of Legends of Tomorrow characters|l1=List of ''Legends of Tomorrow'' characters}}. Done
  • Use the {{Cast listing}} template for the cast section.{
    • Can't work out how to use it, additionally the template is usually used for movies not tv season

Vestrian24Bio 14:10, 4 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian: Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 18:00, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Create a link to Waverider (character)#Television in first mention of Waverider on each sections.  Not done
    • The ship and characters are completely unrelated beyond the name. I've looked into any possible connection and most sources just a comic references
  • Create a link to List of teams and organizations in DC Comics#Time Masters in other media in first mention of Time Masters on each sections.  Done
  • Link Anachronisms and Rip Hunter (Arrowverse) in the overview section.  Done
  • When did the Legends attempted to time travel with two versions of themselves aboard...?  Done
    • Aruba (Legends of Tomorrow)
  • Add "As depicted in ...[ep]" note to the events from prior seasons along with {{cite episode}} refs.  Done
  • In episode summaries, refer Damien Darhk as Damien instead of Darhk, to avoid it from being confused with Nora Darhk. -
  • Link ep 8 title to Crisis on Earth-X#Part 4 instead of Crisis on Earth-X. -
  • Create a link to List of DC Universe locations#Zambesi on its first mention.  Done
  • In ep 11, She reappears in an empty Waverider, where she encounters Gideon's human form; he reassures her that she is alive in the medical bay, and he transported her to his program to convince her to stay with the Legends - is Gideon female or male...?  Done
    • Female
  • In ep 13, Damien tells Nora and Ray, a hostage - does hostage refers to Ray?
    • Yep
      • Remove "a hostage", as its already said he was captured in the previous episode. -
  • Create a link to Memphis, Tennessee in ep 14.  Done
  • In ep 15, Learning that Sara is using the Death Totem, John - change to Constantine.  Done
  • In ep 18, causing him to kill Damien to be released - isn't he already released at the end of previous episode?  Done
    • Ray and Damien travel back in time. I've clarified the wording
  • In Guest starring section, move McComb previously portrayed this version of the character in "Pilot, Part 2" (2016) and "Compromised" (2016). to a note instead.  Done
  • Add appropriate images adjacent to both casting sub-sections. -
  • Link Amy Pemberton, Gideon, Zari Tomaz, (at first mention instead) and Guggenheim in the casting section.  Done
  • Does ref 90 cover the adjacent statement. -
  • The "Guest stars" section should be "Recurring and Guest stars" section.  Done
  • The series was retroactively added to the Arrowverse after he guest-starred in the Arrow season-four episode "Haunted". - unrelated to Legends of Tomorrow. Done
  • Does ref 106 cover the adjacent statement. -
  • In the ratings table eps 8, 9 and 11 should be linked to the ratings section in their episode articles.  Done
  • In the "Critical response" section,
    • Use the {{Rotten Tomatoes prose}} template for the first sentence. Done
    • Merge second and third paragraphs.  Done
    • Move Virgona praised the season's transition from science fiction to fantasy. to the second+third merged paragraph. Done
    • Rewrite the fourth paragraph. Done
  • Format the last part as following,  Partly done (General refs dropped)
== References ==
=== Explanatory notes ===
{{notelist}}
=== Citations ===
{{reflist}}
=== General references ===
== External links ==

Vestrian24Bio 11:40, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • EARWIG shows 28.6% - violations unlikely.
  • Concerns from previous failed GAN answered.
  • Link Dispenser found,
    • 1 potentially spam ref.
      • Bleeding Cool is reliable
    • 11 refs needing archive links.  Done

@OlifanofmrTennant: once all these have been answered I will do a spot-check. Vestrian24Bio 12:06, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Vestrian24Bio: done Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 14:34, 6 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@OlifanofmrTennant: 6 points remain. Vestrian24Bio 04:05, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Final review

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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