Talk:Kim Kitsuragi/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Shooterwalker (talk · contribs) 19:58, 4 August 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 21:19, 7 December 2024 (UTC)

Image review

• File:Kim Kitsuragi.png - Everything looks good.
• File:Robert Kurvitz in 2020.jpg - No EXIF data and uploaded by an editor with very few edits, which is suspicious. That being said, the quality is low enough that I doubt it is being reused from another source.
• Not a GA criterion, but please consider if you plan on going to FAC: ALT text would help non-sighted readers better understand the article (WP:ALT)

Prose review

• On the other hand, Lena Aeschbach describes how annoying Kitsuragi achieves a Brechtian distancing effect between the player and the protagonist, offering an alternative to player characters designed for immersion. - You've introduced everyone, so who is lena?
• Dmitry King had high praise for Kitsuragi's portrayal of the queer experience, including his subtle reactions to other queer characters in the game. - Same
• I've made some edits. Please review

Source review

• Not a GA criterion, but please consider if you plan on going to FAC: source titles should be consistent in their use of capitalization (compare refs 4 and 6, for example)
• Not a GA criterion, but please consider if you plan on going to FAC: archiving internet-based sources will help prevent link rot; not all items are archived
• Refs 22 and 24 appear to be duplicates.
• Earwig and source checks to follow. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:19, 7 December 2024 (UTC)

Review based off this revision.

• Earwig gives 42.9%, but the positives are all properly attributed quotes.
• [27] (all letters). French Stranding is dead. The article is available on the Wayback Machine here.
• [2]b - Source uses "unflappable", which definitely supports calm/stoic.
• [2]e - Supports that ZA/UM created the game. A couple things, like Estonian and 2019, don't show up in the source, but I wouldn't consider either to require a reference under WP:V
• [6]b - Supports claim
• [12] - Supports claim
• [26] - Supports claim
• [44] - Supports claim (and interesting that Jenny Levue won)

Conclusion

• This article is excellent, and it's a shame that it has sat here for so long. I expect this to have an easy time at FAC if you're interested. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:19, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
• Spotcheck done. All good. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:32, 7 December 2024 (UTC)

  Thanks for the review! I looked over your edits and they were universally helpful. Did you fix the duplicate refs? I can't seem to find them, but maybe my eyes are just tired. In the meantime, I added alt text to the images, and added more context about Lena Aeschbach and Dmitry King. Let me know if there's anything else I should do. Shooterwalker (talk) 00:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

  Hi Shooterwalker, it appears that RFNirmala dealt with the duplicate ref with this edit and added the archive to the French interview. Everything else looks good. Happy to promote to GA! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 01:03, 9 December 2024 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.