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The Anybodies trilogy was a People Magazine pick alongside David Sedaris and Bill Clinton, a Washington Post Book of the Week, a Girls' Life Top Ten, a Booksense selection, and was in development at Nickelodeon/Paramount; The Slippery Map, and the prequel to Mr. Magorium's Wonder Emporium), a movie starring Dustin Hoffman, Natalie Portman, and Jason Bateman.

I'm more than capable of improving someone else's writing, provided that I can understand what they mean to say. But besides the fact that this sentence is absurdly long and awkward, what exactly does it mean when it says that this trilogy "was a People Magazine pick alongside David Sedaris and Bill Clinton" I mean, what list would include both published works and former cigar aficianados? I have some ideas what this might mean, but to me, it appears to be a non sequitur. 98.82.85.128 (talk) 19:16, 29 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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