Talk:Joseph Kayll

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Problems with the article

There are several issues with this article as it stands:

it needs to have internal or 'wiki' links inserted; Done
it requires in line citations to reliable sources; Done
it needs to be structured in to an introduction, main section, and miscellaneous sections (e.g. Notes, References, See also, etc.)
it could be improved with a picture;
it needs to have categories added to it to improve traffic to the article; Done
the article could be improved with the addition of an infobox with biographical details. The infobox template can be found here: Template:Infobox Military Person

On top of these, some more specific points:

I believe that the subject's middle name is listed incorrectly. Currently it is listed as Pelham, although every other wikipedia page mentioning him, as well as the sources above say that it is Robert; Fixed
Currently the article is either a copy or very similar to The Guardian article found here: [1]. The article needs to be rewritten otherwise so that it does not breach copyright regulations. Fixed — AustralianRupert (talk) 08:30, 30 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Some possible sources

I have found the following sources that could be used to expand this article:

Hope this helps. — AustralianRupert (talk) 08:30, 30 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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