Talk:Jorge Choquetarqui/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Krisgabwoosh (talk · contribs) 05:09, 6 December 2023 (UTC)

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:09, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Let's do it right.

Hi Sammi! Thank you for opening another review. I just wanted to inform you that I'm in Bolivia for the month, so I may not be super quick responding. Cheers! Krisgabwoosh (talk) 05:02, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

@Sammi Brie: Sorry for the wait. I'll get this done now. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 21:52, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Not much to do: just a question about the origins of a ref and textual claim for [9]. Ping when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:55, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

I cannot find any copy items to change. I spent several passes looking through this one. Very rare for me to say that.

Sourcing and spot checks

• What makes Bolivia Decide (a blog) reliable?

• The blog is actually a mirror site that takes news articles from other publications and republishes them. Therefore, I'm certain it's a republication of a reliable source. Unfortunately, due to link rot, the original source isn't easily searchable, and since the original publication is not cited, I can't even track it down on the Internet Archive. I debated keeping it in, since it has biographical information I couldn't find elsewhere. I decided to add it and leave its inclusion up to the discretion of the GA reviewer. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 21:52, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

• 9: Not very said in source, though support and threats of withdrawal of support are noted. Would like to hear a justification.

• The article mentions that within the span of a week, Choquetarqui's organization went from marching across the country to support the president to threatening to withdraw all its support. In that sense, I think phrases like "fluctuated one a dime" are pretty supported by the text. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 21:52, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

• 14: News article on protests led by Choquetarqui against teachers' strike. Y
• 16: Listing in directory of committees shows Choquetarqui in the given positions. Y
• 17: El diputado alteño Jorge Choquetarqui fue elegido como jefe de la bancada paceña del Movimiento Al Socialismo (MAS), informó el senador Eugenio Rojas. “Ellos (Choquetarqui y la subjefa de bancada) van a entrar a debatir el lunes a las seis de la tarde, con otros jefes nuevos, que van a direccionar este año”, informó el legislador. Y
• 19: See 14

Images

As is usual, the headshot is CC-BY-2.0 and the signature is PD.

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