Talk:Jokero/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 21:05, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox

• Remove worldwide from the caption.
• No album length
  • I'm confused. Do you want me to add the album length? Sebbirrrr (talk) 11:12, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

  along with the radio edit, don't forget to mention it on the body of the article with source MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:25, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

  • Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:44, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
• Label Various → see Template:Infobox song

 Done

Lead

• with Colceru also being responsible for the mixing → too much detail
• Akcent recruited Romanian singer Nico to perform the track with them for it. → Akcent asked Romanian singer Nico to perform the track with them for the competition.
• Mihai Trăistariu's "Tornerò", → release date between brackets
• "Jokero" was received positively by reviewers → "Jokero" was received positively by most music critics + link music critics to music journalism
• Romania and further reached → Romania and it reached
• Two music videos were directed for the track → Two music videos were shot for the track
• one by Dragos Buliga → The first, directed by Dragos Buliga
• disco ball and the other one, whose purpose was to promote → disco ball. The second was recorded to promote
• Selecția Națională, features → Selecția Națională, it features

 Done

Background and release

• vocalist named Georgiana provides uncredited vocals on it → it is uncredited and appears on the liner notes?
  • Replaced "uncredited" with "additional". She is credited as providing "additional vocals". Sebbirrrr (talk) 11:12, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

  So that's different! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:26, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

• A club track,[4] it is sung in both English and Spanish.[5] → The club track is sung in English and Spanish.[4][5]
• Roton,[6][7][8] and in other territories on 5 July 2006 by Music Company Nordic. → Roton.[6][7][8] It was issued in other territories on 5 July 2006 by Music Company Nordic.

 Done

Selecția Națională 2006

• due to receiving the most votes → as it received most of the votes
• having over 30% of the votes → remove
• and was given the fifth spot in the final to perform in → and it was the fifth song performed in the final
• Song Contest due to their performance as they are → Song Contest as they are
• Mihai Trăistariu's "Tornerò" → date of release in between brackets

 Done

Reception

• Add "Jokero" was received positively by most music critics + link music critics to music journalism

 Done

Promotion

• Two music videos were shot for the song → first sentence
• The first music video for the song was directed → The first was directed
• "Jokero" was first performed in Istanbul → second paragraph
• As part of "Romania's Day" → when?
• On the last night of their Finnish tour → when?
• an event hosted by Polish radio station Radio Eska in 2007 → more specific date?
  • It says the event happened across several weeks but not when they exactly performed it. Sebbirrrr (talk) 11:12, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

  Month? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:26, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

  • I missed it, it was in July 2007. Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:44, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
• Make sure these performances are ordered by chronogical order

 Done

Track listing

• Each release, either digital or physical has to displayed propraly, they can't be summarised, use two collumns.
• Use spaced en dash,  –

 Done

Personnel

• Use spaced en dash,  –

Weekly charts

• Fine

Year-end charts

• Fine

Release and radio history

• Fine

See also

• Remove it

 Done

Notes

• See above

References

• Sourcecheck: 1, 2, 4, 5, 15, 20, 29 and 30.

Overall

• Seven days, let me know once you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 10:26, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
  • @MarioSoulTruthFan: thanks again. I've addressed everything. Sebbirrrr (talk) 11:12, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
    • @MarioSoulTruthFan: I think I've addressed everything now. By the way, did you open the "Mad at Disney" review forgetting that you already opened this one? I'm just wondering! Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:44, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

      I wanted to open both, don't worry I will do its review in time. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:34, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

      Don't worry about it I was just curious. Thanks for reviewing anyways! Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:07, 8 June 2022 (UTC)