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Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: This page contains far, far too much self-promotional material, music of which is routine. There are claims which are both unsourced and not informative. For instance, where is the evidence that his mother was a poet or his father a civil engineer? National merit scholar semifinalist is not major, as are his other high school details. Please trim, or another editor could (should) remove vast parts.

Ldm1954 (talk) 07:27, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Addendum: the original editor is cleaning up the article, moving in the right direction. Hence I have reduced the flags. Ldm1954 (talk) 17:17, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
And removed them all today, it is in decent shape now. Ldm1954 (talk) 13:24, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! I'll be happy to make it even stronger if need be. Or ideally, others will edit the page and it will strengthen. Blessed to have worked with you. Fortunaa (talk) 13:30, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]