Talk:Isabel Fernández/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 23:44, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Everything checks out. Just a few minor copy changes and a suggestion from your bilingual reviewer. 7-day hold to Krisgabwoosh. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 23:56, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

• until end add a "the"

•  Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 01:07, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

• social communication I'm half wondering if this should read public relations instead of being a literal translation of comunicación social. Would this merit, maybe, {{tooltip}}?

• The Spanish article for comunicación social connects to communication studies. I've changed it to that. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 01:07, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

• "Associated Journalists Television (PAT)" should be an interlanguage link to es:PAT (canal de televisión)

•  Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 01:07, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

• is "State media" supposed to have a capital S here? probably not

• I've grown accustomed to capitalizing "state" when referring to it in the institutional sense (i.e. separation of Church and State). It's a bit ambiguous here, though, so I've decapitalized it. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 01:07, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

Other items

• References are archived.
• Earwig shows no copyright violations.
• Images need alt text.

•  Done Krisgabwoosh (talk) 01:07, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

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