Talk:Histamine intolerance/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Maxim Masiutin (talk · contribs) 17:12, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: IntentionallyDense (talk · contribs) 04:24, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this shortly. IntentionallyDense ^(Contribs) 04:24, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	ref list exists. IntentionallyDense ^(Contribs) 02:26, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
	2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	stable. IntentionallyDense ^(Contribs) 02:26, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.

I feel like you could at least add some images here of either symptoms (such as flushing etc) or even a photo of histamine in the causes section. IntentionallyDense ^(Contribs) 02:26, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think the lead here best represents the article. Take a look at Wikipedia:How to create and manage a good lead section. Specifically I'd expect a little bit of a longer lead and possibly written in a way that doesn't need citations. IntentionallyDense ^(Contribs) 02:26, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The one bare URL should be fixed as these are prone to link rot. IntentionallyDense ^(Contribs) 02:26, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]