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Article Assessment for WikiProject Medicine

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Hello. I am a member of WikiProject Medicine, a Wikipedia wide project that maintains and improves articles that fall under the scope of medicine. Since your article has fallen under our scope, I have placed the correct templates on this talk page for verification. Upon reviewed the article, I'd like to make a few points, as shown below:

  • I've added Wikiproject Neurology's template to this page, since this article falls under their scope.

I'm glad this article could fall within our scope, and I hope to see it grow large! Many thanks! Renaissancee (talk) 02:41, 2 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: MEDU 9330 - Expanded WikiProject Medicine

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 19 November 2024 and 17 December 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jacusn321 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Jacusn321 (talk) 20:59, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback for Nick!

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There's great potential in this draft. With a few minor refinements, it will be an excellent resource! I noticed some sections are awaiting more development - for instance, the Causes and Diagnosis. In the management section, perhaps go into a few examples of treatments without doing an overwhelmingly extensive deep dive. Your explanation of how genetic mutations impact bilirubin metabolism is particularly clear.

Here are some brainstorming ideas to enhance your draft:

- Consider adding a section on epidemiology (how common these conditions are).

- For clarity, define medical terms the first time they appear (e.g., explain what "conjugated" and "unconjugated" mean in simple terms).

-Include a table comparing the different types of hereditary hyperbilirubinemia.

- Mention any lifestyle modifications that might help manage the condition. Malwright95 (talk) 23:57, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]