Talk:Here I Go Again (Legends of Tomorrow)/GA1

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Nominator: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 23:49, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: EF5 (talk · contribs) 14:09, 2 January 2025 (UTC) Hi! I'll get to this in the coming days. :) E_F⁵ 14:09, 2 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, here's my comments thus far:

"The episode is the forty second overall. The episode" is worded weirdly, I'd suggest changing it to "The episode is the forty second overall; and is". E_F⁵ 20:32, 3 January 2025 (UTC) Done[reply]
"forty second overall" I assume this means the forty-second episode of the season? To be consistent, it should be "42nd overall to air". E_F⁵ 20:32, 3 January 2025 (UTC) Done[reply]
The plot looks good; I've never watched the episode but I'll assume good faith in that it's accurate. E_F⁵ 20:32, 3 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
""Here I Go Again" was written by Ray Utarnachitt and Morgan Faust and directed by Ben Bray" in the production section should be reworded to ""Here I Go Again" was written by Ray Utarnachitt and Morgan Faust, and was directed by Ben Bray" per MOS:SERIAL. E_F⁵ 20:32, 3 January 2025 (UTC) Done[reply]
"The episode takes takes inspiration" There's an extra "take". E_F⁵ 20:32, 3 January 2025 (UTC) Done[reply]
"Additionally it considered a bottle episode" is also worded awkwardly, a change to "Additionally it is considered a bottle episode" would make it flow better. E_F⁵ 20:32, 3 January 2025 (UTC) Done[reply]

Will get to sourcing shortly. E_F⁵ 20:32, 3 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]