Talk:German submarine U-47 (1938)/GA1

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A few comments:

All or none in the lede.

I added a few more citations in the lead if that's what you mean. If not, can you be a bit more specific?--White Shadows ^{you're breaking up} 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, that is what I meant. Sorry I was unclear.

You might try rearranging the two pictures that are next to one another in the first few patrol sections. If you can't find better placement, it's not a big deal.

I've spread the images around in the article.--White Shadows ^{you're breaking up} 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It looks much better now.

A reference and some explanation on the solitary note would be nice.

I've removed the ship from the list of ships hit by U-47. There is no evidence that the two vessles even met each other.--White Shadows ^{you're breaking up} 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Alright.

"...all of whom are presumed dead." "Were" presumed dead might make a bit more sense in this context.

Done.--White Shadows ^{you're breaking up} 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Okay.

Can you add anything more to the infobox?

I;ve expanded the infobox a bit. If there still needs to be more changes to it, just ask.--White Shadows ^{you're breaking up} 01:14, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. Another GA.

Those are all see from a my first read through. Reviewer: Lәo_(βǃʘʘɱ) 20:06, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]