Talk:Fred Narganes/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 01:59, 22 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 14:47, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Add Cuba to first sentence.
  • Added.
• "A native of Havana, Cuba" remove Cuba here after you add Cuban to first sentence.
  • Removed.
• Added cats: Cuban male sport wrestlers, Columbia Lions wrestlers.
• Remove refs from lead.
  • Removed.
• Do you known when he moved to the US?
  • Didn't see anything mentioning it.
• Link London in lead I suppose.
  • Linked.
• "he regained the title of NYAC middleweight champion" I didn't know he won it, the previous sentences didn't say anything about middleweight?
  • I didn't see middleweight in the source, or remember why I put that, so I removed 'middleweight'.
• "The National Wrestling Hall of Fame and Museum summarized his career" He didn't get inducted, did he?
  • He did not, as far as I can tell – the Hall of Fame wrote an article about Latino wrestlers and talked about him, but it doesn't look like he was inducted.
• Just curious how you know that picture is circa "1900s–1910s".
  • It looks like a picture from his career and his career was in those years. Could remove it if you like.
• Remove "Nationality: Latino" from infobox. Not a nationality.
  • Removed.

I think that's everything. Nice research on this guy. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:47, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:58, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

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