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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 04:19, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • The short description should go to the top of the article (MOS:ORDER).
  • "giving them freedom" → "giving them the freedom"
  • "as appanage" → "as an appanage"
  • Remove the comma after "reach out to Tutush".
  • Remove the comma after "28 August 1097".
  • "Duqaq latter feared" → "Duqaq later feared"
  • "give Ridwan an opportunity" → "allow Ridwan"
  • Capitalize Sufis.
  • Remove the comma after "lands surrounding Aleppo".
  • Sort categories in alphabetical order.

Comments by Solavirum

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Fixed everything till the alphabetization of the categories. Green tickY

Note that most of the background section of the article shares similarity to this article's background section, which we touched upon here. --► Sincerely: Solavirum 20:49, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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