Talk:Doctor Who series 14/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: TheDoctorWho (talk · contribs) 04:39, 3 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Pokelego999 (talk · contribs) 15:11, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Will get to this sometime in the coming days. Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 15:11, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Six GA Criteria

1. Article is well-written. Very minimal mistakes if any at all.

2. No OR, all info is cited in the article.

3. Coverage is broad in depth and focus. Shows multiple aspects of the character.

4. Article appears neutral, and does not appear to hold a significantly negative nor positive stance on the subject.

5. Article appears stable. Does not appear to have had any major vandalism occur.

6. Article uses one fair use image with proper rationale.

Lead

-Looks good, but would it be possible to include info on Reception?

Episodes

-"Maestro appears, revealing themself as a child of the Toymaker, with similar powers around music." Clarify this a bit since we don't know the Toymaker's powers and it isn't clear if it means the powers come out around music or if Maestro's powers are similar to Toymaker's music ablities

-"to investigate the woman they have seen throughout time." This woman is not acknowledged before now, so some clarification on her exact role would be beneficial.

-"UNIT already know her: tech entrepreneur, Susan Triad, whose staff Mel has infiltrated." You could probably drop the colon and first comma and write it as "UNIT are already aware of her as tech entrepreneur Susan Triad..."

-"The Doctor realises they can find Ruby's birth mother –" I feel the dash can be substituted with an "and" or something similar

-Make sure to put years of release on the hatnotes here

Casting

-Looks good

Production

-I feel the self-described descriptions of the episodes in the Writing section isn't too necessary since they're summaries of things we know already. Additionally, they're randomly split down the middle into two paragraphs. If this information is kept, it should be kept together.

-Maybe include an image of Murray Gold in Music?

Release

-Looks good

Reception

-Looks good

Overall

@TheDoctorWho: -Overall comment: Make sure to be consistent with whether the source links are hyperlinked or not. I've noticed a mix of both as I've been going through this.

-Citation 1 is Doctor Who TV, which was previously determined by consensus to be unreliable. Please seek a replacement source for where it is used.

-Overall this is looking very good. Patch up the above and I'll do my spotcheck.

Not done with these quite yet (nearly am), just adding a quick to do list for myself with some other things I noticed so I don't lose my place for when I pick this back up:

Replace Doctor Who TV
Replace The Doctor Who Companion
Swap Doctor Who Unleashed cites from cite web to cite episode
Fill in bare Amazon reference
Saw at least one RT source with no author
Address SHOUTING in reference titles
Replace/remove TikTok source
Replace Daily Mirror (if possible)

I should hopefully be able to wrap this up tomorrow! Thanks, TheDoctorWho (talk) 06:19, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Pokelego999: I think I've addressed all of your concerns. Just to clear up the distinction, it appeared that there were cites to both doctorwho.tv and doctorwhotv.co.uk within the article. Both of these listed "Doctor Who TV" in their |work= fields. The first one is a commercial channel published by the BBC, so while it is a primary source, I'm assuming it's still considered okay for use? I have replaced or removed all uses of the second one. TheDoctorWho (talk) 22:15, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]