Talk:Diwali (The Office)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 04:15, 19 July 2012 (UTC)

Issues

General

• No dab links. Great work!
• No dead links. Great work!
• The rationale for the image needs to be expanded

• I agree. I've removed it, as the rationale was insufficient and the resolution was too large.

Infobox

• Add "running time"

• Done

• "List of The Office (U.S. TV series) episodes" → List of The Office (U.S.) episodes"

• List of The Office (U.S. TV series) episodes is the correct link; List of The Office (U.S.) episodes is a red link

Lede

• Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK

• Done

• Explain what a "rating" is. Nielsen ratings, etc.

• The lead is meant to be brief; I've added a link to Nielsen Media Research to help readers, but don't think anything else is needed here

Synopsis

• bicycle to work → bikes to work

• Done

• Unlink text message per WP:OVERLINK

• Done

Production

• Nothing is there

Reception

• Explain what a "rating" is. Nielsen ratings, etc.

• Similar to above. I've added a link to Nielsen Media Research and changed "ratings" to "ratings share". Otherwise, I think everything is sufficiently explained (4.2 percent of all 18-49 yr olds etc).

• Television Without Pity graded the episode with an A → Television Without Pity gave the episode wih an "A" grade

• Done

References

• Ref. 3, 7, 11, 13, 14, 15, 16: All of them need publishers. If you don't know, click on the article for it

• I understand what you're saying, but this is not a requirement of the GA criteria. :) I prefer not to add this information (I think the work/publisher parameters are enough).

External links

• Link NBC.com in the section

• Done

Good work! TBrandley 04:06, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

• Thanks very much for the review! I really appreciate it. It was an interesting episode to write on :) Ruby 2010/2013 04:41, 22 July 2012 (UTC)