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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:57, 24 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Add WP:ALT text to every image in this article.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I found this discussion several weeks ago, in which Box Office India is deemed not accurate for budget estimation. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Dil Chahta Hai was based on Akhtar's diary about his trips to Mumbai and New York City in 1996 and a story by a friend of his" → "Dil Chahta Hai was based on Akhtar's diary, detailing his trips to Mumbai and New York City in 1996, and a story by a friend of his"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Plot summary = 438 words → passes WP:FILMPLOT
  • "he is loves her" → "he loves her"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he told them that screenplay" → "he told them that the screenplay" or "he told them that that screenplay"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "inspired from" → "inspired by"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the comma after "the role of Sid".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "as well as image of himself" – reword
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "which she referred as" → "which she referred to as"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add "the" before "33rd International Film Festival".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subscription".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is the external link to Rotten Tomatoes (with only 3 reviews) necessary?
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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