Talk:Dave Jordano

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My comments are very nit-picky. I would be careful with the qualifiers in this article. You say Jordano started a "successful" business, but was it necessarily successful when he started it? Maybe you need to include a more specific date instead of "shortly after this..." I think it might also be interesting to include a photograph of Jordano's in the body of the article (if there are not copyright restrictions). Other than these minor details, the article is notable and verifiable. Kryan916 (talk) 00:30, 15 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

You might want to discuss the characteristics of his photographs, for example, "The photographs in this collection used bright lighting and hard angles..." Have his photographs ever been reviewed? You could include links that elaborate on the reception of these photographs. Also, if you are able to find an interview with Jordano, you could discuss his influences: Why did he choose to photograph the Marktown inhabitants? Saf704 (talk) 00:34, 15 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]