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Nominator: Another Believer (talk · contribs) 00:44, 7 November 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: APK (talk · contribs) 04:48, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
Two of my favorite things: cats and public art. :-) APK hi :-) (talk) 04:48, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks so much for reviewing! ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:04, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Stable
- No edit wars or other issues.
- Neutrality
- No POV language.
- Lede
- No issues.
- Description
- Comma after
Neil Gaiman
. - Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
6-foot-tall fiberglass sculptures
Add the height in meters.- Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
map of the sculpture
Sculpture should be plural.- Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
effort to revitalize downtown Portland
I would link Downtown Portland, Oregon and remove the link inIn downtown Portland, sculptures were installed
.- Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
inspired by the film's character
Add a comma after character.- Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
outside OHSU South Waterfront
The abbreviation should be added to the first mention in the description section's first paragraph.- Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- I would add "artist" before Celeste Potgieter and write "Another artist, Rae Sheridan, sculpted the Jean-Michel Basquiat-inspired Infinity Kitty, which had large blue and purple eyes."
- Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Comma after
- History and impact
which is based in the U.K.
Write United Kingdom.- Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- Director Park is already linked in the previous section.
- Good catch! Removed. Thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- External links
- The project link is dead.
- Surprising, but removed! ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- The OMSI link is also dead.
- Surprising, but removed! ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- KATU is not linked like the other stations.
- Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- The project link is dead.
- Copyvio
- No issues. Only a few identical names.
- Images
- Fair use images have proper licensing.
- Is the photo of Teri Hatcher necessary? It's crammed onto the page and stuck in the reference section.
- Removed ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:59, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- What a lovely idea for an art project and for a good cause. Only minor issues found. Thanks for writing! APK hi :-) (talk) 06:37, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
- @APK: I think I've addressed your concerns, but let me know if any remain, thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 01:38, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- Look good! Passing. APK hi :-) (talk) 04:09, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
- @APK: I think I've addressed your concerns, but let me know if any remain, thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 01:38, 3 December 2024 (UTC)