Talk:Clavado en un Bar/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:05, 16 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Reviewing an article of yours; been a good amount of time since I had previously! --K. Peake 09:05, 16 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the mixing studio from the infobox, as that is different from recording
Why is Quinta Del Mar mentioned before Puerto Vallarta here but not in the body?
reggae rock → Reggae rock
Pipe WEA Latina to Warner Music Latina
Wikilink as Fher Olvera instead
Add a comma after fifth studio album
"It was written by the group's lead vocalist Fher Olvera who handled productions" → "The song was written by the band's lead vocalist Fher Olvera, who handled the production"
"The track was released as" → "It was released as"
Wikilink lead single
"the protagonist is" → "the protagonist is depicted as" or something similar, to be clear
"was met with positive reactions" → "received positive reactions" and start a new para here
Add after music critics, "who mostly praised..." whatever was highlighted the most
"received an" → "The song garnered an"
"Commercially, it peaked at number" → "In the United States, it peaked at numbers"
Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
"charts in the United States." → "charts, respectively."
""Clavado en un Bar" was" → "The song was"
Remove Dominican Republic intro to the singer
"and peaked at number ten" → "and the version peaked at number 10" per MOS:NUM
Remove "in the US" at the end because we already know Billboard charts mentioned here are for that region

Remove the comma after fifth studio album
Mention that the studio is in Quinta Del Mar, Puerto Vallarta
I can't access the El Norte source so don't know what that says about studios, but why are some from AllMusic not included?
Pipe mixing to Audio mixing (recorded music)
Remove lead vocalist introduction because that being in the lead is sufficient
Pipe punk to Punk rock
If the lyrics end with a full sentence quoted, punctuation should be inside the quote for "you come rescue me."

Wikilink lead single
"for song was filmed which" → "for the song was filmed that same year, which" per the source
Add the word "about" after commented
"and again at the" → "before performing the songs again at the"
"the catchy rocker".[13] Burr" → "the catchy rocker",[13] while Burr"
"of the Fresno Bee" → "of The Fresno Bee" with the wikilink
Wikilink the Rolling Stones
"that the song was" → "that the song is"
"It also peaked" → "The song also peaked"
The ASCAP award should be at the start of the second para instead
"at number ten on" → "at number 10 on" per MOS:NUM
"from the episode" → "for the episode"
Pipe of the same name to Clavado En Un Bar (New Girl) per MOS:LINK2SECT
"where it played" → "where it was played"

Copyvio score looks superb at 6.5%!!!
Pipe El Norte to El Norte (Monterrey) on ref 1, if that is the correct publication
Remove AllMusic from the titles of refs 2, 4, 10 and 19
Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine) and Nielsen Business Media to Nielsen Holdings on ref 3
Wikilink Rolling Stone on ref 5
Add the via parameter citing Newspapers.com for refs 6, 13 and 16, only wikilinking on 6 and adding the url-access to 16
Cite NBC 5 Dallas-Fort Worth as publisher instead on ref 11 and pipe to KXAS-TV
Fresno Bee → The Fresno Bee on ref 14 with the wikilink and remove the double speech mark from the title
Remove pipe on Billboard and Nielsen Business Media for ref 18
Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 22 and 23
Pipe WEA Latina to Warner Music Latina on ref 24

On hold quickly following the review's opening! --K. Peake 10:27, 16 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

✗ Fail now, as it's been over two weeks without a response... --K. Peake 09:50, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]