Talk:CMLL World Lightweight Championship/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:27, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 12:27, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• (Campeonato Mundial de Peso Ligero del CMLL in Spanish) - rewrite as (Spanish: Campeonato Arena Coliseo de Parejas CMLL)

• Fixed

• "who won the it on February 27. 1999." - remove "the"

• Fixed

• "Dragon Lee is the 15th overall champion and is a two-time champion." - reptition of champion

• Fixed

Background

• "In 1999 CMLL began to tour Japan, promoting a series of wrestling shows under the name "CMLL Japan", featuring shows that were a mixture of CMLL wrestlers and native Japanese wrestlers on their shows." - better In 1999 CMLL began to tour Japan, promoting a series of wrestling shows under the name "CMLL Japan". The shows featured a mixture of CMLL and native Japanese wrestlers.

• Fixed

• "The championship was abandoned by the end of 2000 as CMLL abandoned future plans to promote shows in Japan." - The word discontinued would be ideal to replace the first mention of abandoned.

• Fixed

• "was only made public as they promoted a rematch between Williams and Romero." - when

• Fixed

• "During Virus' run as champion the belt was reclassified from "Super Lightweight" to "Lightweight"." - needs a citation

• So looking at the sources once more I found out that it was actually reclasified shortly before Virus won it, updated the article to refect this.

Reigns

• "Virus holds the record for most reigns, 4;" 4 needs to be spelt out

• Fixed

These are the points I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 13:16, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

• All done.  MPJ-DK  21:30, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

• Thanks. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 05:30, 23 August 2016 (UTC)