Talk:Bonifasius Belawan Geh

A fact from Bonifasius Belawan Geh appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 14 November 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that prior to entering politics, Bonifasius Belawan Geh collected edible bird's nests from the jungle after dropping out of college?

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:31, 6 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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~~... that Bonifasius Belawan Geh initiated construction of the first asphalt-sealed road in Mahakam Ulu Regency?~~ Source: https://kaltim.antaranews.com/berita/45362/mahakam-ulu-prioritaskan-pembangunan-jalan-dan-jembatan
- ALT1:... that the Indonesian politician Bonifasius Belawan Geh collected edible bird nests from jungle after he dropped out of college? Source: https://kaltimkece.id/pariwara/pariwara-mahakam-ulu/mengenal-bupati-mahakam-ulu-mendayung-sampan-ke-sekolah-terpaksa-berhenti-kuliah
  Archive: https://web.archive.org/web/20211005143611/https://kaltimkece.id/pariwara/pariwara-mahakam-ulu/mengenal-bupati-mahakam-ulu-mendayung-sampan-ke-sekolah-terpaksa-berhenti-kuliah
- ALT2:... that the Mahakam Ulu Regent Bonifasius Belawan Geh rented a cave inside jungle to harvest edible bird nest on it to support his family? Source: https://kaltimkece.id/pariwara/pariwara-mahakam-ulu/mengenal-bupati-mahakam-ulu-mendayung-sampan-ke-sekolah-terpaksa-berhenti-kuliah
  Archive: https://web.archive.org/web/20211005143611/https://kaltimkece.id/pariwara/pariwara-mahakam-ulu/mengenal-bupati-mahakam-ulu-mendayung-sampan-ke-sekolah-terpaksa-berhenti-kulia

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Created by Nyanardsan (talk). Self-nominated at 11:23, 5 October 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Personally, I'd go for ALT1. {{u|Sdkb}} ^talk 01:52, 6 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Article was new enough and long enough at the time of the nomination, and I didn't find any close paraphrasing. QPQ has been done. Concurring with Sdkb that ALT1 is the hookiest hook; assuming good faith for the Indonesian source. However, because the hook fact for ALT1 is spread over multiple sentences, each of these sentences need to have a footnote rather than just the end of the paragraph. In addition, both the hooks and the article could use some copyediting. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:24, 20 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Narutolovehinata5: Fixed for citation Nyanardsan (talk) 12:02, 21 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. However, the hooks and article still need to be copyedited. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:19, 23 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Narutolovehinata5: Working on it, apologize for the late reply Nyanardsan (talk) 09:19, 24 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Done for article CE, may I ask assistance from reviewer to CE the hook? Thank you Nyanardsan (talk) 03:34, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'd rewrite ALT1 as the following: ALT3 ... that prior to entering politics, Bonifasius Belawan Geh collected edible bird's nests from the jungle after he dropped out of college? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 09:52, 2 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, thank you very much :) Nyanardsan (talk) 13:28, 2 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. Since I introduced a new hook fact to the hook,

another editor needs to sign off the revised version (which I've labeled as ALT3). Theleekycauldron? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 00:10, 3 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This is my purpose now, i suppose—hook is cited inline and interesting, we're good to go! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 00:21, 3 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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