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This review is transcluded from Talk:Bob Vaughn/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:53, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Notes

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  • Added the offensive guards, high school baseball and football coaches cats
  • Change guard in lead and infobox to offensive guard
    • Changed.
  • I assume you couldn't find any college stats for this lineman?
    • Wasn't able to.
  • "He signed his rookie contract on June 13" Article said it was the day before
    • Fixed.
  • Is source 18 locked? I was trying to verify the date he was waived.
    • Its from the paywalled NewspaperArchive.com - its available through the Wikipedia Library here but I didn't include that link as only Wikipedians can access it.

That's all I think WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 04:15, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 19:31, 22 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]