Talk:Blake Miller (center)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:44, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 13:09, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

(===...===), level 4 and so on.-->

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Added a cat.
"He attended Alexandria Senior High School where" comma
"first-round NFL Draft pick" lowercase NFL draft :(
"earning All-Southeastern Conference (SEC) honors" first or second? add to infobox.
- Any sources that say if the coaches named him first or second team? ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:34, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  - @WikiOriginal-9: Per 1990 All-SEC football team it looks like they didn't distinguish? BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:57, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Ok. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:43, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"and to the NFL Scouting Combine" remove to
"rose to offensive coordinator in 2001" Does the source say he was still line coach at this time as well? Just asking because it's in the infobox.
Change "Later life" section to "coaching career"
No personal life details I guess?

That's all. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 13:09, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: I think I addressed everything. No personal life details found. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:41, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Also, he was the offensive line coach at the same time he was coordinator. Should I change anything? BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:41, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  Okay, that looks good now. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 04:43, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.