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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Alf Ramsey (pictured) led Ipswich Town to become English football champions four years before leading England to win the 1966 FIFA World Cup?
On this day... A fact from this article was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "On this day..." column on April 28, 2019.
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That GA review above...

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Is everything now addressed? --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 14:48, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, that's why the template at the top of the page says "Alf Ramsey has been listed as a Sports and recreation good article under the good article criteria." Woot!! The Rambling Man (talk) 15:00, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Ace. --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 15:05, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

FAC to-do list

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As we push on now towards FAC, I'll create and update a to-do list. With GA done, it should be relatively straightforward. He says optimistically. --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 15:05, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I share that opimism. Standards are at an all-time low around here, this is going to be a cakewalk. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:07, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Check all sections of copy for style, citations for claims, balance
  2. Review for comprehensiveness
  3. Check that Lead is a good representation of the article
  4. Check MOS compliance: images, citations etc
  5. Get a third-party copyedit
  6. Check that the copyedit hasn't broken any compliance issues!
  7. FAC

--Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 16:26, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Probably need a sympathetic ear for most of this, we can't see the wood for the trees. I'm sitting with my 90-year-old Grandad right now who knew Alf well, so my opinions aren't NPOV enough for most of this...! The Rambling Man (talk) 20:09, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Check all sections of copy for style, citations for claims, balance

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In terms of balance, the story breaks down as follows:

1920-1938: 4 parags for 18 years (Early life)
1939-1946: 6 parags for 6 years (War time)
1947-1949: 7 parags for about 3 years (Portsmouth)
1949-1955: 15 parags for 6 years (Tottenham and England)
1955-1963: 6 parags for 8 years (Ipswich manager)
1963-1974: 19 parags for 9 years (England manager)
1974-1977: Nothing at all
1977-1980: 3 parags for 3 years (Later mabagement)
?: 2 paragraphs (Later life and death)

Reflections... I think it's mostly about right. This is a very rough and ready way of looking at the balance but it's useful because one thing stands out a mile to me. I suggest that there is far too little about his time as Ipswich manager. The numbers suggest that a better balance would be about 15-16 parags on the subject, a substantial expansion. --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 11:02, 25 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man, do you have any sources useful for expanding the section on ITFC managament? --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 11:56, 31 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
If I'm very lucky, I'll have a quick look when I get home if I make it through the day. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:58, 31 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Main page date

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January 2020 will be the 100th anniversary of his birth. That gives us plenty of time to get this done! --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 15:07, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

After England

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Hope you don't mind, but I've expanded the After England section a bit, to include what he did between England and Birmingham, as well as a bit more detail on his Birmingham career. Contemporary sources make no mention of his leaving for health reasons. Please feel free to trim/rearrange/remove at will. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 11:52, 25 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Omg, Struway2, I don't mind at all. Please feel free to throw yourself into this! --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 13:45, 25 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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Eton Manor

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Recent additions have Ramsey as “manager” of Eton Manor F.C.. Based on the one added reference of limited detail, this is questionable as other refs[1] have him as merely doing some coaching.--Egghead06 (talk) 05:46, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I concur. From his biography Winning Isn't Everything by Dave Bowler, p. 107: he "began to coach non-League Eton Manor on a part-time basis". It was later described as Ramsey's first "rung on the managerial ladder" but part-time coaching does not equal manager. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 08:48, 25 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Jeff Jones (15 February 2020). East End Born and Bled: The Remarkable Story of London Boxing. Amberley Publishing. pp. 214–. ISBN 978-1-4456-9498-6.