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Reviewer: Tayi Arajakate (talk · contribs) 18:16, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hello Lee Vilenski, I'll be taking up the review for this article and will present it to you in some time. I hope my feedback will be helpful and that I can learn something new in the process. Tayi Arajakate Talk 18:16, 12 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
No problem, thanks for taking a look. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:53, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Lee Vilenski, I've completed the review and could not find any issues that would disqualify it from meeting the good article criteria. I have otherwise left two suggestions regarding the prose below. Tayi Arajakate Talk 09:56, 17 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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  • The first sentence in the lead could be split into two. It can sound confusing because the tournament starts in 1952.
  • "who had won the World Snooker Championship as the BA&CC authorised event, and the match-play championship in 1952." This could be rephrased a bit too.

Assessment

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  1. Comprehension: The article is well written.
    2. Pass Pass
    Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (prose) The prose is clear and concise. Pass Pass
    (b) (MoS) Article is compliant with the manual of style. Pass Pass
  2. Verifiability: The article is verifiable.
    3. Pass Pass
    Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (references) The article has a list of references and inline citations for all lines in the body. Pass Pass
    (b) (citations to reliable sources) Sources used are reliable. Pass Pass
    (c) (original research) No original research found. Pass Pass
    (d) (copyvio and plagiarism) No copyright violation or plagiarism found. Pass Pass
  3. Comprehensiveness: The article is adequately comprehensive.
    4. Pass Pass
    Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (major aspects) The article provides adequate coverage to all major aspects. Pass Pass
    (b) (focused) The article remains on topic without unnecessary deviations. Pass Pass
  4. Neutrality: The article is neutral.
    5. Pass Pass
    Notes Result
    The article is compliant with the policy on neutral point of view. Pass Pass
  5. Stability: The article is stable.
    6. Pass Pass
    Notes Result
    No ongoing edit warring, content disputes or major changes. Pass Pass
  6. Illustration: The article is well illustrated.
    7. Pass Pass
    Criteria Notes Result
    (a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales) Image used is tagged with its appropriate copyright status. Pass Pass
    (b) (appropriate use with suitable captions) Use and caption is suitable. Pass Pass
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