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"It was written by" → "The song was written by" removing the backup vocalist and brother/music producer introductions since them being solely in the body is sufficient
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Add a sentence after the above one mentioning that A.B. challenged Astudillo to write the song before they got to Las Vegas and what it was inspired by
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""¿Qué Creías?" is a mariachiballad, that Selena describes as" → "A mariachiballad, the song was described by Selena as" with the pipe
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"It is the singer's torch song, the lyrics" → "It is the singer's torch song and the lyrics"
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"and feminist lyricism" → "and female style of lyricism." per the body, ending the sentence here because the other two parts aren't notable for reception
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The commercial performance sentence should be the first of the second para instead
Retitle to Music and lyrics, as the theme is to do with the lyrics
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Most of the direct quotes in this section should be in critical reception instead; you could start a reception section below with this and the other form of reception in the commercial success section
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""¿Qué Creías?" is a" → "Musically, "¿Qué Creías?" is a"
Create a Reception section instead here with the critical, radio and commercial reception; place critical commentary as the first para
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"it entered at number 38 on" → ""¿Qué Creías?" entered at number 38 on"
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I think the radio information should come before commercial performance
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"received extensive airplay in" → "received extensive airplay in various locations, including" only mentioning notable ones like Austin and Houston, so you avoid a supermarket list
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"rose to number 30,[23] though it fell to" → "rose to number 30 on the chart,[23] though fell to" to avoid overusage of it
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Remove the holiday season rise sentence, as the following one will still be succeeding a sentence about the song going up
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"to number 24 the following week," → "to number 24 for the week of January 16, 1993,"
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"on the chart for an additional four weeks before falling off, for" → "on the Hot Latin Songs chart for an additional four weeks before falling off, lasting for"
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The music video, press conference and live performances should be moved to a promotion section instead
Should ref 37 really be citing Anon rather than RIAA?
I cite any website that does not explicitly provide an author as Anon rather than the website's name. Let me know if you'd like me to change it for this ref.
Thanks for your review! I've left maybe one or two comments for issues that were not made too clear for me. Thanks – jona✉21:49, 12 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
AJona1992 Nice work, however I have two points left; the A-side should be surrounded by speech marks and source it in the body by mentioning the release, also you need to add "the" before Del Rio News Herald. --K. Peake09:36, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; that didn't take too long! --K. Peake 09:21, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Done Thanks – jona ✉ 11:41, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
