Talk:"Weird Al" Yankovic in 3-D/GA2
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Reviewer: Cerebellum (talk · contribs) 10:33, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
Hello! I will be reviewing this article! --Cerebellum (talk) 10:33, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
- Some critics were split on the changes in which Yankovic composed, performed, and recorded his parodies. This should be reworded - "in which" doesn't really apply to "changes."
- There is an "as of" tag in the commercial performance. You need to specify "December 2011" or whatever the correct time reference is.
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- What makes Yahoo music a reliable source? How about buy.com? You could probably just remove both of these, leaving the genre section in the infobox uncited; FAs like Enter the Wu-Tang (36 Chambers) and The Dark Side of the Moon have no references for the genre either.
- Reference #9 also uses buy.com - why is this reliable?
- The link for reference 31 seems to be be broken.
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
Looks good! I'm place this on hold for seven days, so just let me know when you've fixed the issues above and I'll promote this. --Cerebellum (talk) 11:26, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- Alrighty, I believe I've fixed all the issues. Also, a note on 31, there isn't an exact way to pin-point the album on the RIAA website, so you have to wade through a couple pages to get to the right page.--Gen. Quon (talk) 14:53, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
- Good job! Happy to pass now. --Cerebellum (talk) 09:11, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
- Alrighty, I believe I've fixed all the issues. Also, a note on 31, there isn't an exact way to pin-point the album on the RIAA website, so you have to wade through a couple pages to get to the right page.--Gen. Quon (talk) 14:53, 7 December 2011 (UTC)